My second metal production (I need constructive input)

[Arthemischya]

Hello friends, how are you?

Introduce me, Arth ...
I am a solo musician who does all the production of this song, assisted by my partner who is filling in the vocal position ...

Maybe there are friends here who want to provide constructive input ...
So that I can produce my music even better in the future ... Please advise and guidance ... Thank you in advance ...

I provide links from 2 different places, Youtube and Soundcloud to make it easier ...





And this is an instrumental version ... without the vocals ...
For those who want to hear the instruments clearly ...





Thank you for your time and input ...
Have a nice day ...


Regards...