My Second Mix Ever ( Crits Please )

[aspirinq]

So , my second mix ever. I spent alot of time on this , i've only been mixing for like 4 or 5 months. Any crits are appreciated , even if its " this sucks " . atleast tell me why though , so i can improve off of it. Thanks.

 

[Jeff Seabolt]

Pretty good man, especially since it's your first mix. I like the intro, I can tell you used the Nexus VST.

Only criticism I have is the guitar tone could be a little bit more crisp and clear.

 

[tmitchell33]

Damn good second mix, I would work on bring some more mid range into the mix