Need crit on this, both mixing/songwriting/mastering

[Gujukal]

I'm currently working on a new song for my band and i would appreciate some critique on it. I made the mastering and most of mixing from scratch, except some of the drums. There is no screams since the screamer in my band is supposed to do that

https://soundcloud.com/rtr-records/reason-to-regret-new-single

 

[EnjoiTrent]

I really dig this man. I think the kick is a little loud, personally. If you bring it down so it gels with the rest of the mix I think it'll sound great.

 

[oroinvictus]

+1, kick is definitely too loud

 

[3tuxedo]

The kick really didn't sound too loud to me. But then again I was listening on laptop speakers. Starting at :28 the chugs sounded heavily edited to me, if that's what you are going for,then keep it. I did really like the overall sound.

 

[tmitchell33]

Vox need to be redone, they are really grainy

 

[Gujukal]

Yupp the kick is way loud, forgot to fix that before i uploaded it.
3tuxedo: Its meant to be very tight sounding but not sound overedited, like Born of Osiris and that stuff.
tmitchell33: What u mean with grainy? I know the vox are pretty crappy, recorded it on the first try i think so will probably redo it

 

[3tuxedo]

In that case, you nailed it homie.

 

[tmitchell33]

What u mean with grainy?

They just sound like bad pre amps pushed too hard! It's coming along though!