Need critics to my metalcore mix(Pod Farm, SSD 3.5)

[Frank-Whengrey]

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/60617591/pure_fullmix(4).mp3

Guys, kick my ass for all oversights in this mix:Shedevil:.
Tones, ballance, dimension and space - everything.

You are welcome)

 

[Frank-Whengrey]

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/60617591/pure_fullmix(5).mp3

Edited, I think it's final mix.
Come on, guys! Need your opinions.