Need help finishing up this track (vocals)

[shaggysi0]

The song is called Waste. I wrote and recorded/programmed the instrumental stuff. The vocals are done by Thomas from the band Shores. I've worked with him before and his vocals are sick.

Tempo is 135BPM

Basically there's a chorus part in the middle which we can't figure out. Thomas is on tour right now so doesn't have unlimited time to fuck about with this. Ideally I'd like some clean vocals there, a big part with a harmony. Lyrics would be your free reign, as long as they fit the theme of the song. I think Thomas freestyled on it to a degree.

Anyone wanna take a shot at it? Been working on it since mid November and would like to get it finished.

Here's an mp3 of the track in question:-

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/60685025/Nameless Streets_brandnewmixmaster_THOMASVOX_2.mp3

Ignore the Nameless Streets thing, that was just a working title.

 

[alex-sonic]

Your mix is just awesome!
I like voice and drums, the guitar is pretty good but I don't like the sound of it, yes I know it's weird to say it!

and if I can give my advice on your song, the beginning is good then we have the same riff, I think it's really boring

Hope uou'll find clean vocalist

 

[shaggysi0]

Thanks! Glad you like the mix! Yeah, I need to step my game up on the writing for sure.