Need some feedback on this Mix

So, this is the first mix I've ever done, and I'm pretty happy with it considering its the first one I've done. But I know there are a few things off about it so I'd like some feedback. It's my bands first song and I'd like to keep doing our stuff since I'm not rich and can't really afford to shell out $1,000+ every album.

I know the vocals can be better for sure and I have people tell me I sound much better live, and there are a few other things I know are wrong but I'm not 100% how to fix them. So if you hear anything that sounds off and you have some tips I'd really appreciate it.


here are some links to the song:
https://soundcloud.com/trevor-thelen/enemies-among-us-the-time-the-sheriff-got-called

http://www.reverbnation.com/enemiesamongus