Need some feedback

[TheToddGreen]

Hello all, been lurking on here a while for tips and such, learned a lot from just watching. "TheTrevorStrain" informed me of this forum, very glad he did.

So now I have joined the community. I was wondering if I could get some input on this mix I've been working on.

http://www.soundclick.com/toddgreenproduction

Its the only track posted for now.

Setup: Addictive Drums, PodFarm 1.12 (Treadplate and Diamondplate heads)

Thanks

 

[stmchris]

def coming along man.
i dig it so far

 

[AudioPhile777]

Sounds good, but there is not really much clarity in the mix... sound the mix as a whole is lacking shimmer... the toms also lack beef/body.

 

[TheToddGreen]

thanks chris, youve had the opportunity to see me progress haha

AudioPhile777
-Appreciate the feedback.
-Gah, thought i fixed the muddiness, time to tweak the tone a bit, probably going to test lowering the gain and the room mic of the guitars.
-Shimmer, hmmmm... time to see if i can listen and see exactly what you mean, think i have a gist of it though.
-i have been working on the toms the least, guess its time to get to business with em, they are a pain, but i know itll end up paying off.

Thanks,
-Todd