Need your opinions and advices 8-) Not brutal :-)

[CrazyClown]

Now i'm doing premixing of my group's album before mixing in studio and be very glad to get some opinions and advices.
here http://www.deforceband.ru/song1.mp3 littles song without vocal, so you are welcome. Music is not very heavy and brutal, but not rock ;-)
What do you think about guitars, bass, drums (keys are bad 8-( i know), all mix.

 

[mjgg6]

Hello there, you better wait for experienced people here but here are my two cents:

Toms are big, big,big and the drums sounds with too much reverb for my taste. I liked the snare.
Guitars have to much distortion and needed a little more attack and presence.
The bass sounds good alone but is a little lost when the other instruments came in, I would try to make it more present.
I really liked the synths and the whole idea of the song.

That is my humble opinion.
Cheers.