New melodic hardcore idea, need opinions!!!!

[Amorzinski92]

I wrote this last night, looking for opinions on it!!!



https://www.dropbox.com/s/ew49qp3kq8r6gib/New%20melodic%20Idea%20V1.mp3?dl=0

 

[Conor1807]

That's awesome!! Personally I wouldn't have it repeat as many times if I was using it in a song but other than that it's killer dude!

 

[Nikolas Quemtri]

Need to imagine where the vox might be. Also some breakdown with fast palm-mutes would be great to hear.