Great song and I love the vocals.
The drums at the beginning: the hat sounds way too dropped in and on the beat... like you have just dropped a sample in every 4.
When the intro speeds up, especially the second time, the guitars just don't seem to fit. They sound out of time. I think a change in how the the part is played is needed or a new riff.
Slipknot are a good example of slight changes to a simple riff every change of the drums. Gives the song drive and movement.
other than some slight drops in volume on some tracks (automation should sort) the song is pretty darn cool and rocks dude. Well done