new mix, some advice please

[Goodfellas453]

Hopefully my mixes are sounding better than worse, this one sounds better to me, i actually have bass in it, please gimme advice on what i can improve, i used some subtractive eq to try and make space

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19141991/test mix check.mp3

 

[stevenjersey]

more bass or less eq cuts on the bass :/
rest is nice

 

[Goodfellas453]

bass guitar or on master?

 

[Goodfellas453]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19141991/hp all but bass:kick.mp3

bass pulled down

 

[pixiusd]

How did you make the beginning to this?

 

[Goodfellas453]

the intro? i programmed the big ass drums with with native instruments evolve mutations pack i bought, and i had the gun and shot sample from logic

 

[corybrunnemann]

the gun shot doesn't blend it and it should. its like super loud then the rest is quieter. the guitars sound thin. the cymbals are loud and the drums sound unrealistic. its not the worst thing i've ever heard, but there's always room to improve! tighter guitar playing will help the final product be tighter. the loose guitar playing along with the super triggered sounding drums make it more unbelievable. straighten it up. spend time getting the guitarists playing better!

but yeah, pretty decent. keep workin!