New Song by me [No Djent, -core etc..]

[CubanDude]

Hey guys,

wrote a new song for my yet undefined project (looking for a singer atm). So.. Please say something about the mix (and the song, if you want to )

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5325954/StillYetUnnamed9.mp3

Cheers!

 

[Erratic]

Listening:

I really like that ambient start, you got me hook in an instant
I would bring up the distorted guitars a lot personally
and I'll scoop it a bit at around 1200 hertz, it's fizzy

And if you got lyrics I could record vocals that interests me a lot, I already hear the vocals style in my head.
(They're would be Harsh vocals though, meshuggah type of vocals)

And it needs a guitar solo
What's your Daw?

 

[CubanDude]

Thanks for your reply!

Yeah, I already figured that out, the balance between the single elements is not perfect, but I'm having some trouble with my cpu performance with the PC I have to use at the moment (I already ordered a new one), and it's the first time I'm working with DI tracks and LeCto and stuff, which seems to be too demanding for my current gear

I'd love to hear some vocals on it, although I don't have any lyrics for it, cause I'm not really good at writing lyrics. But maybe we find a solution for that..?

I'm a reaper user!

And btw: Yeah, guitar solo would be great, I was just too lazy to lay one down, guess I'm gonna add one asap (quite busy atm)

 

[Erratic]

well I don't mind doing one just now if you want, just give me the root notes and I'll nail one pretty soon.

 

[CubanDude]

For clarification: You need the chords I'm playing in the different sections, right? Just before I'm writing all the stuff down and you're in need of something completely different

 

[Erratic]

nah it'll be ok i'm half-way done with the solo

 

[CubanDude]

Ah, cool man!

 

[Erratic]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/wjlw5n9wk5trcd0/Erratic Solo tryout.mp3

There you go, I don't know if you'll like it, I'm a strange lead guitarist but I tried to make it fit although it's hard to glue well but you'll get the idea

 

[CubanDude]

Not bad at all, man. Way different approach to lead guitars than mine, but very interesting. Could you maybe upload the solo track only?

And: You got some fast fingers!

 

[Erratic]

Hey Thanks, I've been playing for a while!

There you go for the dry file!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/njj9t38uyqd16le/Dry Erratic Solo.mp3

 

[CubanDude]

Thanks man!

More opinions?

 

[CubanDude]

B for bump!

Cmon guys, need your help, otherwise I'm gonna suffer endless ignorance