New song for new project needs feedback please

the-emerson

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Oct 22, 2015
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FNG here, I am trying to get as much feedback on my material as possible, I have had a break from guitar for about 3 years so I treated myself in August and got back to recording. If you guys like what you here or don't like it please let me know.
After sitting with this for a few days the structure has settled with me, I have a friend coming over next week to help flesh out some of the bass parts.
Let me know what you guys like and dislike about the track
Gear used
Pod Farm
Schecter Banshee with Nazgul Sentient in Drop B
Superior Drummer 2
Peavey Millenium 5 string Bass
At the moment the only post processing to the signals has been panning to give some seperation and a high and low pass on the rhythm guitars.
When I am more capable with mixing I will spend a week polishing my tracks but for the moment I want to put an ep's worth of material together.

https://soundcloud.com/aulinton91/the-rift