new song + lyrics

brutalbabydeath

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Sep 14, 2008
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new vocal tryout


heres the lyrics




Unrestricted cranial decimation,
Dismantling limbs of the prevaricating pest

Prepossing the vitality of unpropitious notables


whitness the ending of everything as you know it,
gather the corpses from the walking diseased

we knew,
we knew everything

we will,
we will spread disease

when life's done with you
you'll be a piteous coward

Unrestricted cranial decimation
Dismantling limbs of the prevaricating pest

on the field of battle
it reeks of death
push aside the corpses
and make way for hell
 
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Screams are shit, growls not loud enough. Lyrics are pretty mediocre, but it doesn't matter if the music's good. The music, as far as I can tell, is also pretty mediocre.
 
the song was really quiet if i turned up anything anymore including growls or screams it would sound all staticy

the lows would sound like this at (1:08)
(different song better quality recording)
 
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Okay. Your screams are too harsh. I think it would help if you played with the mic. I think the input is too high. There's some issues with the lows too.
But the main problem, again, is that this isn't good music.
 
Okay. Your screams are too harsh. I think it would help if you played with the mic. I think the input is too high. There's some issues with the lows too.
But the main problem, again, is that this isn't good music.

yeah my mic sucks.... its a 10 dollar computer mic. and i dont like half the songs i put vocals to.. i mainly do it for practice
 
Ok.
The Sure SM57 would be a good investment. Because the lows sound good and the screams might be decent with a better mic.