New Song Mix Superior 2.0/Spider Valve HD/Boobs...

[wyllie]

Ok i lied.

There's no boobs....But Check out my song?

Im looking for opinions on the songwriting more so than the production but of course if i've made a stupid mistake somewhere in the production be sure to tell me! haha

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/419166/Song Clips/new string song.mp3

Cheers dudes!

-Wyllie

 

[TheDude]

I would raise the tempo a bit, because it seems that you're playing the guitars faster than the tempo.

It's pumping when the double bass drum kicks in. So much that the guitars sounds like their played with a tremolo engage.

 

[wyllie]

I would raise the tempo a bit, because it seems that you're playing the guitars faster than the tempo.

It's pumping when the double bass drum kicks in. So much that the guitars sounds like their played with a tremolo engage.

ok at the risk of sounding like a twat..i've had that problem before, could you posibly think why it'd be happening and how i could fix it?

Cheers Dude!

-Wyllie

 

[kaomao]

way too much gain imo

 

[drew_drummer]

Gain is fine. Could be a tad faster and tighter - record to a click, not just the drums, if you didn't use a click that is.

 

[PostMortem1666]

Too much gain and it sounds like it needs a TS of some sort. Also pumping very badly.

 

[wyllie]

Cheers for the replies guys

I know the guitar sound is abit different but i kinda think what you guys are saying as bad points about the tone i seem to like :s
I've done the whole using a ts vibe and i didn't get what i was looking for....Duno if i did something wrong but it didn't flot my boat lol

Im gonna redo some of this as i agree , parts of it could be ALOT tighter....Just figured id stick it up here to see were opinion was on the song
Gonna have a go tryin to stop it pumping but i've gotta be honest im not sure how to! Time to use the search button

Cheers for the help guys
-Wyllie