New User - need some feedback :)

[MatteoHammer]

just thought id ask everyone what they thought of my screaming, this is me just kinda messing around, pure and raw, no effects or anything, straight from a recording.

tell me where you think i need to improve/if im good enough to be in a hardcore band...etc.

this isnt a song. just kinda random

thanks!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/91733096f52474fa/

 

[Redeemed Immortal]

You definitely have potential, but you seem to be in pain... Practice? Yours screams are too short to really tell.