Non-Metal Instrumental Feedback

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Hey everyone. I revisited a song I started a couple months ago and decided to share it since it's just been sitting around. It's still in the works and I want to change up certain parts, but I'd love to hear whatever feedback (critiques on recording, mixing, composition etc.). Check out my music project, Beyond Reach, (www.facebook.com/beyondreachmusic) and my Soundcloud if you like what you hear!

https://soundcloud.com/prabhu-ragunathan/beyond-reach-song-2-demo

Thanks!

Prabhu

 

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Any thoughts?