Non-metal mix test critique please

[merritt stone]

So I'll be recording some demo songs for my friends new band. It's more rockish like Circa Survive and stuff like that so I went about making tones and experimenting with a mix. The only mixing experience I have is with metal and even that is to a very beginner degree Any opinions or tips would be great.

Thanks

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/18954556/The%20Soviet%20Mix%20Test%20-%20Master.mp3

 

[The Front Studio]

Does sound a lot like Underoath to me... which means it sounds great. Maybe a little Dance Gavin Dance as well.
Sounds nice eitherway!!!

 

[merritt stone]

Thanks

Anyone else?