black dahlia murder type song, test mix for criticism

[RSN89]

hey guys, staring in through the window for quite sometime and thought i'll finally put up a mix for some criticism/reviews on a mix ive been doing for a uni project


drums were all recorded at leeds metropolitan studios, triggered kick and snare , guitars are a mix of a close mic, 57 slightly off axis engl fireball and a pocket pod with tweeked settings etc etc

kind of new the whole mixing process, but finally manned up and put something online for a critique, i feel like the guitars do like the space they need, any hints or tips would be greatly appreciated


http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20677641/got%20tech%20rough%20mix%2010.mp3

 

[viralz]

Adding a bass guitar would make your mix sound much fuller. Now it sounds weak and lack some punch. Cool riffs though