O.k. Here`s the vocals Pt. 2

[john3232]

Ok. Here's the vocals pt 2

Thanks for all the previous comments.

I made a few changes.


Here`s a link to the song I`ve been working on:

www.geocities.com/hiimpact3/

Or:

www.geocities.com/newsinger2003/index.html

I’m hoping for some feedback concerning the vocals.

Question: Does the vocal vibe show any potential at all?

Or is it totally hopeless?

Please rate on a scale of 1 to 10 (ten being top)

THANKS!!!

 

[SoulVomitor]

I give it a 3. You use the word 'them" istead of "those" which makes it sound unintelligent from the start.

 

[abrasiverock]

You have way too many effects for the classic rock style you are doing. You also over enunciate on most of the lines. From what I could hear under the effects it sounds like you need to breathe more as well to make it sound less flat. Don’t give up though. I have heard some singers with about 1/8 the talent you have turn out some pretty great shit with the right vocal training.

 

[HarmonyDies....]

2 out of 10