Would be good if you wrote down what you used and how you did everything too.
But a quick listen reveals that it has waaaaaaay too much treble overall, and pretty little low end. I believe there was no bass guitar? I'm so senile... already forgot what it sounded like haha.
The writing was pretty cool though, from the second half and forward.
the drums are real recorded with a mackie sr 24/4 / kick, snare 50% original + 50% sampled (i'm not sure if the snare sound is good) / toms are 100% original / hi hat + overheads are highpassed at 800Hz
i tryed to scoop put the bad frequencies and bossted the good ones.
bass was recorded with di and mixed with digidesign eq and compression
guitars are 2 left / 2 right and the amp was a marshall jcm900 with 1 sm57. the guitars are not processed