Opinions/advice on my mix please

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16817300/LowtuningLulzM.wav

Superior drummer/samples, tse X30, pitch shifted guitar for bass :(

I already know it clips in a few places.

Be as harsh/honest as you feel the need to be. Thanks.

only advice I could give (because i couldn't mix something any better than this) is do something about that low string. Either it's being played sloppy or its too thin for the tuning. hasn't got that twang that it needs.
 
Thanks, yea, it's nowhere near thick enough, I was just playing around one day and dropped the top string to A. So the tuning is AGCFAD