Original metalcore song

Rachid

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Sep 12, 2013
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Hello guys!

I've been sitting down at home writing a tune for a couple of days now and I have finished the structure and general idea of how the song should be. But.. I feel like there is something missing. I would appreciate if some of you folks listened to the song so I can receive some constructive criticism and make the song even better.


Below is the link to my soundcloud and the song I would like you to listen to is "No name yet"
It's not mixed yet, the only thing i've done to the track is to EQ the Snare and Bass drum. The track is also a little sloppy at some parts but it's just in the pre-production state!

https://soundcloud.com/rachidjijih

Greetings from Sweden! :headbang: