well paramore have a way bigger basssound. if your going for the last alge mix on brand new eyes, maybe a/b more to get more of the glue and expensiveness of alges work.
vocals dont sit well in the verses, sound separated from the mix (rethink your use of reverb). in the choruses they gel better due to more layering.
but overall it doesnt grab your ear (like alge mixes do)
but yeah again, as i said, compare your work more to pro work,
and youll immiditaley hear whats "wrong" or what you should do differently.
hope that helps, your going into the right direction! keep it up!