Please rate my mix of some post-hardcore band. Help this amateur mixer!

[MystycalFanfare]

Here's some example my mix of post-hardcore band.
I'm a newbie amateur home producer/mixer. Let me hear what you thing guys.
Give me some punch for develop my mixing. Any comments and critics are appreciated.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/rt3lom7ungxofie/01%20-%20Burn%20The%20Disco%20Floor%20With%20Your...%20-%20Gloomy%20Night.rar

 

[MystycalFanfare]

Feel free to give a shot guys!

 

[WalhallaM]

1.Humanize drum,change velocity and drum is out of tempo,just a little faster
2.Set levels better- keys to loud,bass guitar buried,vocal to loud also
3.Pan guitars

List is much bigger,but do this for now.Cheers

 

[MystycalFanfare]

1.Humanize drum,change velocity and drum is out of tempo,just a little faster
2.Set levels better- keys to loud,bass guitar buried,vocal to loud also
3.Pan guitars

List is much bigger,but do this for now.Cheers

Thank you!
The drummer is actually play real drums, I just triggered it with samples. So I have no idea to change the velocity and quant tempo.

But anyway, thanks for comments. I'll check my mix with your list here first.
cheers!