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[Norke]

hi guys, this is my first post here.. listen to my mix and tell me what you think.. i need advice on how to sound loud and clear.. maybe litle tricks for the snare ... i always loose the snare in the mix.. what ever.. please comment .
theres the link (by the way im not english :S)
http://www.megaupload.com/fr/?d=AWZJR90S

 

[Norke]

anyone ??..

 

[GarethSE]

Upload it to soundclick/esnips/dropbox?