Pointers on my mix??

[CalumJC]

Hi guys, i dont get alot of feedback on anything i post (if any at all) so hopefully this time i will.

Just want peoples thoughts on this mix. performance aside

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/34780973/Test track 3nd mix.mp3

 

[Tesseden]

It's not bad but it's a little muddy, and in some places the guitars are too quiet.

 

[Ze4th0x]

Snare sounds a bit out of place imo...

 

[CalumJC]

Revised Version

Any better?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/34780973/Test track 4th mix.mp3