Praetorian - Any thoughts?

[Face_down_in_blood]

Hey all,

Feeling generous and want to give a couple of my tracks a listen? Any feedback would be most appreciated, whether critical or otherwise....I create these tracks on my own, programming the drums, multitracking guitar, bass, vocals, etc... and as such, am starved of the creative input of other musicians. Any thoughts would be great to give me a little more genre-savvy direction.

If you listen to just one of these please go with this one:

Homo Sacer

I include this next track only to show you what I have moved on from, both (hopefully) in terms of production and musicianship.

The Arcane Pain

Thanks guys....your thoughts are appreciated

Cheers

 

[Jeffy]

Thats really brutal man, Ive only listened to the first song. The drums are too fast and fake like alot of people do with drum machines. I like the crazy ass vocals though!