Produced A New Track, Opinions Please!

[Kirknewm]

So, I recently got the metal pack for my Toneport, and made a new track with it. I personally think it's the best so far I've made as far as tone goes, I made it after just a few minutes of buying the metal pack, so I should be able to dial in some better tones later on. Plus I'm getting hooked up with some sweet patches from someone on another forum I frequent. For the vocals in the beginning, I used a cheap Shure PG68 from Best Buy, and then raised the pitch of my voice to get the "black woman" effect

Here it is, criticism encouraged!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=460168&songID=5752029

 

[broken81]

Shouldn't this post be in the rate my mix section???

 

[Kirknewm]

Yeah I guess your right. Sorry I'm new to this forum and haven't really learned my way around :zombie: