Progressive rock (Think Circa Survive, Coheed & Cambria...)

[_wayfarer]

Hey everyone, here's another recording I've done in the last month or so. It's sort of a progressive rock song, and I'd love some criticism (not only on the quality, but also on the music).

ALSO, if anyone has a high-pitched singing voice along the lines of Claudio Sanchez or Anthony Green, I would love, I repeat, love to get in touch with you and possibly make an "e-band". I could write songs like this all day and would love to find someone to write some lyrics and some great melodies over songs like this. I'm pretty serious about my music, though so I prefer some serious lyrics and not some poppy, care-free lyrics. Make sure to get in touch with me if you think we're on the same page!

 

[qwe1234]

sounds pretty thin and lacks in low end overall.

i really dig your songwriting!

 

[Fael]

That's great if you're going for old-school Coheed and Cambria (hell, even Shabutie). However, I also think it sounds thin and lacks low end. I don't know but the bass drum sounds kinda weird too... much louder than anything else.