Rate mah Mix please :)

[TrueDesire]

Hey guys

Can you please tell me how i can improve this?

It was done through some pretty crappy headphones but ahh well

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/33225359/Intro.mp3

Thanks again all, and all comments are welcome!

 

[oroinvictus]

The mix as a whole is much too compressed and scooped, everything is pumping really hard. The rhythm guitars are so scooped I can't actually hear what they're playing, I just hear the sound of a pick on strings.