Rate my guitar tone

[Limak]

Hey there, there you go, dual tracked:

Ver 2 Revalver impulse:
http://www.fileuploading.net/966777



Sorry for lame random riffing, sorry for out of time playing, i know i suck
but i need opinions on guitar tone, what do you guys think?

Bah after 10 min break from listening to it, daaamn this sounds so bad

 

[Sora01]

I like the second tone better than the first, has more potential, first tone is far too fizzy. second ones still a tad fizzy, id maybe roll of the gain a tad?