Rate My.. Intro?

[Harley Barley]

i wrote this for a band to open their live show a while ago but they didnt decide to use it i might use it for live shows tell me what you think?



* when played live the guitars, drum and bass that are in the breakdown at the end would be played by the band with the cellos playing from an iPod or sometihng*

 

[ScottCash]

This is awesomely creepy. But since it is an intro for a "live band" I would take out the "band" section in the intro and use some crescendo strings and horns orchestration instead. Then, when your band did play right after this intro it would have more impact. Really cool intro though man!

 

[Mago]

This is awesomely creepy. But since it is an intro for a "live band" I would take out the "band" section in the intro and use some crescendo strings and horns orchestration instead. Then, when your band did play right after this intro it would have more impact. Really cool intro though man!

pretty much this, impact after the intro would be cooler
I also like it a lot!

 

[Harley Barley]

i would use a version without the guitar drums and bass in that then have it being played live then after just ring out and be YOO WHATS UP TORONTOOOO then go into a song haha

im glad you guys like it though !