Rate my mix/song 5153/IR

too tinny man. sounds like its just been downloaded from youtube or something :P the levels are clearly all good, coz the waveform you have going on there is goddamned even as hell. but this needs a fuck load more bass
 
The new version sounds clouded.. I know the problem, though: At first it's thin and suddenly it's muddy as fuck. You gotta find a good compromise.
I think the guitarsound is a bit too tiny and lifeless and thus can't be compensated by the bass. Perhaps try adding a heavily distorted bass to the existing bass sound.