Rate my newb recording

[gixxsta04]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3236545/Jusitn Wallace - Eats Me Up.mp3

I know it sounds horrible. This is my first day on the forum and I'm here to learn better recording techniques. Just downloaded the tss/wagner/guitarhacks stuff and I'm starting to get better guitar tone already. This is one of my first attempts at scream vox btw. I was going for an Alexi sound.

 

[HCL]

Vocals sound great, not sure if they fit though.

Bass if very clicky, maybe try low passing it.

 

[leaky24]

Diggin the song!!! but the mix needs abit of work.

The kick needs some low end, the snare i cant hear.
Id leave the vocals for now.
The guitars are abit harsh, maybe try scooping the mids or decreasing 2-5K region.

 

[Sunny84]

Just out of curiosity, are those the lyrics from dysfunctional hours of that Nuclear Blast colaboration album?

 

[gixxsta04]

Yes the lyrics are from dysfunctional hours. Some of the chording is similar as well. Just a scratch track to practice tracking/mixing.