Rate this mix, help needed

[xthecavemanx]

This is only my first export of this song but im not sure if im headed in the right direction. some help would be nice. i didnt record this band, just got the tracks to mix them so i dont really know much info about how stuff was recorded.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19506497/Ass Rhyme With Grass.mp3

 

[Heavy Melo]

you havnt gotten a reply yet cause theres a 404 error on your link.