Definitly better than version one. you should now focus more on the drums. Maybe it's the samples in itself, i mean I don't know session drummer's qualities, but it sounds very un-natural. You can almost taste every one shot sample in there. The snare has somehow to much bottom mic, and the kicks still need scooping. Try lowering the 250-600 hz area. There is a very unpleasant peak in that area.