Remixed my bands Demo Song - *please comment*

[Fragle]

hey there,

title says it all basically...i did a remix of my bands 2008 demo song, as i've grown unsatisfied with the old version, plus i got much better equipment (esp some real monitors vs. the stereo i used back then) right now.
the idea is to make a remix that's as good as possible without retracking anything, and then replace the old myspace version with it, send it out to labels etc for applications and so on.
i'd be very grateful if you guys could give it a listen and tell me where i'm still going wrong...i definitely need someone with fresh ears as of right now

so, here's the remix:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=896998

and so that you can compare it to the old version, here's the myspace link:
http://www.myspace.com/retaliationdeath

once again, any comments are greatly appreciated!

thanks in advance,

dennis

 

[Fragle]

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[Fragle]

well....does it suck *that* hard, guys?

 

[Fragle]

*UPDATE*

re-did some of the parts, mainly tried to raise the cymbals a tad and give the whole mix more ooomph....

any comments?

 

[botus99]

Guitars are really woofy sounding. Cut somewhere around 400hz. Vocals sound great

 

[DTDJosh]

Agreed, guitars sound woofy. Not bad though.

 

[Fragle]

thanks guys.
i edited the guitars to give them less woof and more cut. check out the soundclick page (WD - new guitars!)...is it better than the other version??
also raised the drums a tad at 1:17 - 1:22 while i was at it.

 

[Fragle]

alright, myspace site is updated with the latest remix.
so far i'm satisfied, as are the other guys...quite a task, as mainly our drummer had lots of complaints during the mixing stage. well, i guess it just is kinda difficult to make programmed (addictive) drums sound natural and human....