Review wanted...

[DracWell]

Ok, so I've been strugling with this piece today.
Now tell me what's good and bad and what to do before I say what I think *lol*

http://212.112.183.111/samples/Catharsis.mp3

Oh btw, this is my first "real" mix.

 

[Nitronium Blood]

-Drums and vocals too loud. Covers the riffs.
-Intro TOO LONG AND IRRITATING.

 

[preludetotorment]

i dont know anything about recording, but the vocals do sound too loud and the intro could have been about 30 sec shorter. the holdsworth type solo at the end was cool.

 

[DracWell]

Well, the intro is another part, that's comes into the area arrangement and composing, not sound producing

but yeah, the guitars might be too low.
What disturbs me the most is that damn snare and the kick might be a bit clicky

 

[DracWell]

Here's a new mix, less click in the kick some overdrive on the bass. louder guitars, lower vocals. And no intro It's been decided to have on a seperate track anyway.

http://212.112.183.111/samples/Catharsis-01.mp3