RUNESCAPE DEATHCORE - Need opinions

[MaellaJohn]

It's a WIP. I'm still improvising with extra effects and such.
Was aiming for a Sturgis sound.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9992828/01 Fuck Jagex, I Got Banned.mp3

Any opinions or comments would be beyond fantastic.

 

[Jan [MTW]]

Good Mix - STRAAAANGE Song!
Synths are a little to loud in my oppinion.
The overall mix doesn't sound "fat" enough, really thin.

 

[CSMadden81243]

you've got too much compression going on in this mix (on the entire thing it sounds like) especially when the kick drum and guitars are playing at the same time. and like the joker said, it's not fat enough yet.

 

[MaellaJohn]

Thanks for the feedback, and I know what you mean about it not sounding fat enough. Any suggestions on how to improve the fatness? [lol]

The synths were meant to be a lead, that's why they're so loud.

 

[MaellaJohn]

I just downloaded Ozone and gave it a try. And I widened the stereo image, and did a few other small things.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9992828/Fuck Jagex-newmaster.mp3

Better?