second demo
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Undefined
Indefinite Entity
Guitar work is awesome, I really like it... the rest is 
I mean the drums and shit are ok, lyrics too... it's just what ruins it is the vocals....... I can do vocals for you duude... or someone else can... just change! This seriously sounds like Immortal.. I mean if they had their throats cut that is. And Codi is fucking right... it does sorta sound like a parrot dude. I think if you re-recorded this song with better vox, it could be pretty kickass. That's just my opinion. Good effort though!
I mean the drums and shit are ok, lyrics too... it's just what ruins it is the vocals....... I can do vocals for you duude... or someone else can... just change! This seriously sounds like Immortal.. I mean if they had their throats cut that is. And Codi is fucking right... it does sorta sound like a parrot dude. I think if you re-recorded this song with better vox, it could be pretty kickass. That's just my opinion. Good effort though!
Nick Brookes
I Love Alans Balls
Mix the tracks then we shall talk, at one point the guitar is out of time, its about the middle of the track where you have hat lead lick, guitar needs to be cranked up, and the vocals XD, but good track if it was mixed good.
Nerve
Record Collector
I like that ! But the vocals suck as hell, Heartless is right. Really too bad, for the rest of the song is a fuckin blast
KillerGon
UM Troll member
Guitar work is awesome, I really like it... the rest is
i agree with this. i also agree the vox sounds like a dying animal.
Undefined
Indefinite Entity
Yeh, well it's understandable, as a one man band, I don't mind I mean, it's excusable in this caseok ok lol...
well im doing the right way and not fucking up my throat ( i dont even use it) but ok ill have a look how to make better.. i absolutely NEVER practise vocals, thats the thing
perhaps find someone who can do vocals! I will volunteer but I'm sure there's much better than me!
