Second song i did. still searching for a vocalist.Please Let me know what you think

[john2910]

https://soundcloud.com/cbeekhuyzen/16-3-breakin-dawn-master

If somebody likes it let me know and if you want to do vocals on it..

The lyrics and vocal line is up to you..

If you can do it and have some good recording stuff at home let me know..

 

[Habsburgs]

breaking dawn!! i love twilight

but seriously, the song doesnt flow very well. Keep the 1st riff and rewrite the song. The riff @ 1:05 is pretty sweet but i dont think it works with the first hardrock riff.

edit: shit you wanted opinions about the mix not the song.. i feel like a dick

 

[john2910]

breaking dawn!! i love twilight

but seriously, the song doesnt flow very well. Keep the 1st riff and rewrite the song. The riff @ 1:05 is pretty sweet but i dont think it works with the first hardrock riff.

edit: shit you wanted opinions about the mix not the song.. i feel like a dick

Thanx for your reply...

I am gonne take some more time on the song maybe rewrite it...

 

[john2910]

more opinions please.....

Its a good learning process..

 

[john2910]

nobody?

 

[john2910]

Did a slighly remix of the song..
But i didnt change the song..

https://soundcloud.com/cbeekhuyzen/16-3-breakin-dawn-master