Short songs I've been mixing..

[mstone564]

These are two songs that my friend and I wrote out of boredom, so the simplicity and actual music itself is pretty awful (it's veeeeery generic deathcore). But, I've been messing around with whatever I can to make it sound good production wise.

Any tips, concerns, something that's not loud enough or is sticking out too much, ect?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/For Teh Scene Kids.mp3

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/Lane Bryant Had a Dream.mp3