Sm7b Clean sing vocal cover

[foundations]

heres a vocal cover of mine, be gentle im not realy experienced at singing only been dabbling in it the last couple of months. i love my sm7b wondering what you guys think of the clarity im getting out of it and also my tuning skills to make my vocals sound half decent

 

[LeSedna]

In my opinion it needs more editing before anything else, it sounds too much like 2 or 3 guys trying to sing together than one.

He sounds good for someone who is just starting !

EDIT : is this the original song he is singing on top of ? would explain it