so..uuummm...

  • Thread starter Ghost of Red Dragon
  • Start date
I couldn't read through that whole story. I got bored after like 2 sentences.
I think the little synopsis on this thread should have been what you used for your story write page.
 
This forum has succumed to the jiberish of the Tard and the Perv.

Someone flash the Bat signal. We're doomed!
 
I wanna have the same last dream again,
the one where I wake up and I'm alive.
Just as the four walls close me within,
my eyes are opened up with pure sunlight.
I'm the first to know,
my dearest friends,
even if your hope has burned with time,
anything that's dead shall be re-grown,
and your vicious pain, your warning sign,
you will be fine.

Hey, oh, here I am,
and here we go, life's waiting to begin...

you spelled "succumbed" wrong... I'M THE FIRST TO KNOW

edit: gibberish, too
 
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