Just listened and it's a great song, it has a little bit of a Daylight Dies feel to it. The song progression is really solid, all transitions flow very naturally and logically. I also really like your clean vocals on here, growls are solid, good production. I'm looking forward to hearing more.
Thank you Caleb I'm not sure how that overt melodeath/doom direction got in there, it's not something I usually play. Glad the overall picture is working, it's quite differerent but I've only heard positives so far