some recommendations for my mix....

put a gate and/or fade in and fade out the guitars when they're not playing to get rid of the amp noise. bring down the overheads quite a bit and put a compressor on each of them that way the cymbal crashes don't blast you so much. did you use samples on the kick, snare, and toms? they sound a little unnatural. i would put a tiny bit of reverb on the snare and toms to make it sound better.
 
yes, i know , its not total edit this song. ok comrpess cymbals.

samples in kick 100%, snare 50% , toms without samples.


thankss men :)