Supp, need some feedback on my mix (brutal death metal)

[n3crolatry]

Hey guys

This is my first post in this forum so if I break any rules dont be pissed of or anything

ANyways, me and a friend got this brutal death metal project. We recorded a song this week with Superior drummer 2.0 with metal foundry, guitar through a Ibanez 7-stringer and a Line 6 Studio X1 box and basso with Ibanez 5-stringer through the same box.

Since this is the first time I am trying to mix a song I could use some feedback on the shit I got so far

Download the song: http://rapidshare.com/files/373248983/Jolly_Pirate_Donuts2.wav

And yeah, if anyone who is interested in this genre and got some skills want to produce or EP, just shout out!

 

[Nauru]

Boooo rapidshare.
Dropbox all the way.

 

[Nauru]

Doesn't sound half bad, but is totally lacking in the lower end, and the guitars could use some work.

Beef up that kick and bring up the bass

 

[n3crolatry]

Thanks for feedback Nauru.
Tried to do what you said, and it sound better

Didnt know rapidshare was bad in this forum. I got a account there si I figured it wud be easy to upload there.