Tear this apart for me

tempe

Captain Midnight
Sep 22, 2005
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Just sent this track off for approval and the band was incredibly happy which is good, but well I'm not.

For starters I'm not happy with the low-mids on this at all it feels really empty with nothing really dominating that region, and coupled with a less than awesome low end this was a real battle.

I'm also not to happy with the clean vocals, they were all doubled including the harmonies then tuned, edited, vocaligned. I'm just not happy with how they're sitting. I deliberately ducked the guitars quite a bit in the section with the cleans as I wanted to focus as much as I could on the singing...

Basically I want some advice on where I can improve from here :)
 
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