Post anything on the lyrics here, any of the songs. Just read the list in my sig and come up with additions or changes, I'll change it then. 
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The final Character lyrics thread..
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TheFourthHorseman
In The Twilight World
The New Build: "The need that is our enemy", that was in the NWB thread already. I'm pretty sure about that one.
yeah, sounds like that.
Could use filling the blanks in Dry Run, etc. And maybe by the time we're done with the lyrics, we will have the booklet
Could use filling the blanks in Dry Run, etc. And maybe by the time we're done with the lyrics, we will have the booklet
doesn't exist? well i'll be damned. I didnt think it sounded all ok, but a quick google search shows it's actually used.
I didnt think it sounded all ok, but a quick google search shows it's actually used.
Blame Kov.
Hysteria is the correct one. why do you use google? don't you have any translation engine for swedish<->english?
i use dict.leo.org for german<->english
i use dict.leo.org for german<->english
no i didnt use a dictionary, i checked if anyone had used it on the web. Not everything is in the dictionary.. English speaking people please, is that a make-believe word?
and thanks for the input on Dry Run, it makes sense with The blazing highs. Sounds like it's about drug abuse or similar.
Not everything is in the dictionary.. English speaking people please, is that a make-believe word?and thanks for the input on Dry Run, it makes sense with The blazing highs. Sounds like it's about drug abuse or similar.
i posted the lyrics link on irc in the #dark-tranquillity fan channel (Quakenet) and one of the users noticed that in Am I 1? it's "Yeah, you better check if it's me in that coffin of yours" and I think that's very right. so add this please
done!
Also I changed this in Dry Run: Misgivings in the story nightlife ... Where's the mirror, that shatters the image?
Also I changed this in Dry Run: Misgivings in the story nightlife ... Where's the mirror, that shatters the image?
Kovenant84
T-369 days
Haha. I only put 'hysterity' as an option - I know it's not a real word, that's just what it sounded like . And on that note, what about 'richdom' in Out of Nothing?
~kov.
. And on that note, what about 'richdom' in Out of Nothing? ~kov.
@Kov: Yeah, classic example of Swenglish/Svengelska. (I'ts rikedom in Swedish.. ) I changed it to ritual, not sure if that's correct.
@MorbidEnemy: Yeah, I integrated those parts you changed. Thanks!
@Cortexon:
Poor Cortexon..
Just an idea, grab them all and work on your own copy, in case this should be lost or something.
) I changed it to ritual, not sure if that's correct.@MorbidEnemy: Yeah, I integrated those parts you changed. Thanks!
@Cortexon:
Poor Cortexon.. Just an idea, grab them all and work on your own copy, in case this should be lost or something.
Kovenant84
T-369 days
Might want to change up The New Build - I know now I got some of them wrong:
What you enforce
Once stronger than logical
Beyond the focus
With the grander ideas
One microcosmos
In this wretched piece of hell
Distant memories of what empathy we felt
No revolution
No revolution
In what they must overthrow
It's not a secret we have known //Not 'Another secret we all knew'?
The need that is our enemy
Chorus:
I don't ever want to see you
Doing all the same things as me
Don't ever let this be you
Knowing what it is that drives me!
It's all in the future
What's said with one foot in the grave
It's all in the plan
Well what we never could achieve
No satisfaction - no satisfaction
We excuse ourselves from progress
By <those wondering> the motives
Our story said too much
Another beat that drives the impulse
Another tune that carries through
Another soul that rattles empty //I really like this version TFH's, right?
Is one reality too few
Were we just never wider
Another drop of what we grasp
DOWN
Oh a vicious curse
What law that we forsake inside
A conflict
And the one against the wiser
None the wiser
Our space invaded! //TFH again, I think had it right
Selfish, they begin to cover
The sentences of utopia
One to escape the arguments
Put another filter on
Chorus
~kov.
What you enforce
Once stronger than logical
Beyond the focus
With the grander ideas
One microcosmos
In this wretched piece of hell
Distant memories of what empathy we felt
No revolution
No revolution
In what they must overthrow
It's not a secret we have known //Not 'Another secret we all knew'?
The need that is our enemy
Chorus:
I don't ever want to see you
Doing all the same things as me
Don't ever let this be you
Knowing what it is that drives me!
It's all in the future
What's said with one foot in the grave
It's all in the plan
Well what we never could achieve
No satisfaction - no satisfaction
We excuse ourselves from progress
By <those wondering> the motives
Our story said too much
Another beat that drives the impulse
Another tune that carries through
Another soul that rattles empty //I really like this version
TFH's, right?Is one reality too few
Were we just never wider
Another drop of what we grasp
DOWN
Oh a vicious curse
What law that we forsake inside
A conflict
And the one against the wiser
None the wiser
Our space invaded! //TFH again, I think had it right
Selfish, they begin to cover
The sentences of utopia
One to escape the arguments
Put another filter on
Chorus
~kov.
EDIT: Bah. I have made updates to alot of songs, minor things. Things look pretty good/complete now.. I will keep the page for a while, atleast until someone has posted official lyrics and the album is out.
I will keep the page for a while, atleast until someone has posted official lyrics and the album is out.this morning while riding to school i think i got the first verse of Senses Tied correct:
Riddled by the tropics
What was that makes the edges burn
Here on the outskirts - the prosperity - the pride //I know it doesn't sound like it, but i think it makes sense together with "outskirts" and "pride"
Stretched as far as one can reach
But I learned (to) defy your meaning // he sings But I learned, but grammatically there must be a "to", but he doesn't sing it
There's something out there, lost beyond your power lines
Riddled by the tropics
What was that makes the edges burn
Here on the outskirts - the prosperity - the pride //I know it doesn't sound like it, but i think it makes sense together with "outskirts" and "pride"
Stretched as far as one can reach
But I learned (to) defy your meaning // he sings But I learned, but grammatically there must be a "to", but he doesn't sing it
There's something out there, lost beyond your power lines
Great! What about these lines?
The <..> of our conditioning
I can't even stand and told to fabricate - A denial on display // It's not accurate, but ..
Thinking about what ..
We touch the very..
When nears that hear no end to which // HMM. The sounds are like that.. does it help anyone?
It passes on, from wicked mouth, as vision takes another run // I think the first are correct
New bound oppressor - What<teachers?> brought down now stand tall // teachers? lol. and is it bold, found or bound?
What about these lines?The <..> of our conditioning
I can't even stand and told to fabricate - A denial on display // It's not accurate, but ..
Thinking about what ..
We touch the very..
When nears that hear no end to which // HMM. The sounds are like that.. does it help anyone?
It passes on, from wicked mouth, as vision takes another run // I think the first are correct
New bound oppressor - What<teachers?> brought down now stand tall // teachers? lol. and is it bold, found or bound?
The <..> of our conditioning
i hear something like "The hands of our conditiong" but "ends" would make more sense. i suppose it's "ends" :>
"The senses punish here" <- that doesn't sound to me like this, but i don't know what it is else.
"I can't even stand and told to fabricate" doesn't sound like "told to fabricate" to me, but don't know what it is else.
and i think it really is "litmus", but dunno if it fits well into the song
i can't really help here. i can only doubt some things...
my negation:
first line: "...leaking ego crave"
at the end:
end of forces (i don't think that's right, but it must be pretty close)
end of grace
i hear something like "The hands of our conditiong" but "ends" would make more sense. i suppose it's "ends" :>
"The senses punish here" <- that doesn't sound to me like this, but i don't know what it is else.
"I can't even stand and told to fabricate" doesn't sound like "told to fabricate" to me, but don't know what it is else.
and i think it really is "litmus", but dunno if it fits well into the song
i can't really help here. i can only doubt some things...
my negation:
first line: "...leaking ego crave"
at the end:
end of forces (i don't think that's right, but it must be pretty close)
end of grace
I think My Negation is (metaphorically) about a building so:
The art of reduction
Stripped down to - What seems defendable
Scale to bare revisions
Learn to stop making sense
<Ravelling> pillars - Of towering fear // It could be .. avelling and the pillars would be ravelled. ( To tangle or complicate. )
Rational instincts - And insight to spare
With the forces
End of grace
would make sense.. first strip a building.. and the forces are in it makes it ugly.
The art of reduction
Stripped down to - What seems defendable
Scale to bare revisions
Learn to stop making sense
<Ravelling> pillars - Of towering fear // It could be .. avelling and the pillars would be ravelled. ( To tangle or complicate. )
Rational instincts - And insight to spare
With the forces
End of grace
would make sense.. first strip a building.. and the forces are in it makes it ugly.
KryptoN
Hidden
Here's my shot for some of the lyrics:
The New Build
....
Whatever beat that drives the impulse
Whatever tune it carries through
my(?) fierce soul, it rattles empty
It's one reality too few
....
Am I 1?
....
The mind is hard to please
<...> // I can't agree with the "surrendering with ease", neither can I propose an alternate (for now)
Words clenched in fists of rage
Can't feel the frustration
There's a part of me that cannot deal
with the character I am forced to be
It's a thinly failed plan
To lay a world afoot
Lost in community
Light in belonging
....
Lost To Apathy
....
The heartstrings hold off with despair - Fail to resonate //arteries or heartstrings
Frailness of our body-wrecks - Will disintegrate //frailness or (the) frailest
....
Had to try...
What do you think?
The New Build
....
Whatever beat that drives the impulse
Whatever tune it carries through
my(?) fierce soul, it rattles empty
It's one reality too few
....
Am I 1?
....
The mind is hard to please
<...> // I can't agree with the "surrendering with ease", neither can I propose an alternate (for now)
Words clenched in fists of rage
Can't feel the frustration
There's a part of me that cannot deal
with the character I am forced to be
It's a thinly failed plan
To lay a world afoot
Lost in community
Light in belonging
....
Lost To Apathy
....
The heartstrings hold off with despair - Fail to resonate //arteries or heartstrings
Frailness of our body-wrecks - Will disintegrate //frailness or (the) frailest
....
Had to try...
What do you think?
Yeah, I added those lines now. they sound good to me Heartstrings was supposed to be in there according to Erik, and it makes sense with resonate..
Heartstrings was supposed to be in there according to Erik, and it makes sense with resonate.. Similar threads
